This looks good, Steven.
I did make a quick tweak, however. Your text about your father looked like this:
{s:MemberImage|Left|}
Your text...
I changed it to look like this:
{s:MemberImage|Left|
Your text...
}
Notice that it is a very subtle difference. All I did is place your text between the {s:MemberImage|Left| and the }. MemberImage is a "tag" that tells the page where to find your father's image. This change allows your text about your father to float to the right of his image instead of being directly below it. This keeps it consistent with the layout of the other pages.
I would like you to make a couple other changes, if you don't mind. First, you have the mission name/target listed. Could you change the mission name from this format "Berlin" to this one "Berlin (#64)"? You can do this by going to our Mission page, look at the date for that mission and find the Mission number for it.
I'd also like you to list the aircraft serial, if you know it and the pilot that your father served with. This will help me for the future where I plan to get this information into our actual database.